Summer is beautiful. From the brilliant rising of the sun to
warm up the fields of childhood adventure to its dramatic setting accompanied
by cicadas and laughter, what graduate from childhood can’t remember some great
summer memory. Those days were wonderful, I remember as a kid as soon as school
was out for summer we were outside.
There were so many things to explore beyond the school; the
neighbourhood, the wilderness, new creative exploits through summer cultural
programming. It was the freedom of summer that fueled my imagination and my
appetite for adventure. So, naturally I am against the idea of
eliminating summer vacation for children and sitting them back in the
schoolroom.
I am a kinesthetic learner, meaning I learn best by doing.
The current curriculum in the Canadian education system, and this includes
universities, is not geared towards myself and others with different learning
styles. Looking back, having the summer to run, jump, catch bugs and laugh with
my friends were integral to my education. Through the act of doing these
various activities concepts cemented themselves in my mind; concepts of how the
world works, how to see beauty and how to interact with others.
If we are going to remove the joyous adventure that is
summer we need to do more for these creative and experiential learners. Do not
simply put them in another math class instead of a soccer field. Bring back
more funding to arts education like theatre, music and visual art. Expand
physical education, use the summer advantageously by organizing courses for
camping, portaging or mountaineering. Bring in courses that involve field trips
to national parks and cultural events of this country.
To take summer away from children can rob them of the
unofficial education they get by traveling with family to national historic
sites or by playing outside until their parents call them in.
Even though the elimination of summer vacation can rob
children of a wonderful two months it doesn’t have too. In fact, it can even
protect it and ensure that our children have a great summer experience. It is
no surprise that kids spend more time staring at screens than riding bikes or
going on hikes. Only if summer vacation activities, like camping or visiting
national parks and historic sites, are worked into the curriculum then school
during the summer can improve the health of our children and preserve the
adventure of the summer months.
I loved this. I love how you incorporated your childhood into this, immediately catching the reader's attention.
ReplyDeleteThere are some points where I felt like some extra commas could have been used, but that's just technicalities.
I like how you mentioned the health of children and the element of adventure. It brought the whole piece together with a sort of theme that summer is the time to have adventures and grow as a child.
The fourth paragraph seemed a bit disconnected from the rest of the piece because it came out of nowhere for me. If someone hadn't read the article that we were responding to, they may not have known about the situation we could be facing.
Great piece.